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He pulls the strings we are all just puppets in his marionette.

All dancing unaware of our strings being plucked one by one dancing under his control.
There is no use in running he will find you for his show, you Are just one puppet in his large marionette show.

So keep dancing in his show and pray he will let you go, the biggest string he holds tight attached to your heart, so dance puppet to keep your heart intact or have it be destroyed by the master of the marionette show.
found my old notebook
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Scintillant-H Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013   General Artist
I am reluctant to use this emoticon because that one person uses it for all their comments on your work, but :wow: seriously--this SO describes Slade!!
Have you ever seen "Teen Titans"? They have THE most arsome villain "Slade" and i wish he was my dad...
but anyway--hes always doing things like this.
He's the "dad" type and wants to be a parent so he uses "heartstring puppeteering" to do it. He loses each time, but this little piece of yours so fits him...!
He's a nice guy, he's just not very good at showing it ^^;
Do you mind if I use this piece in a Slade work I may do in the future? that one and this one by you [link]
I dont know how long it will take me to get it done, maybe months, but I'd like to use these words (and in the other one) faded in the background if it's OK with you ;)
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Monchichi1 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
Sure go ahead and use them, just make sure to mention me :)
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Scintillant-H Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013   General Artist
I will! ;)
:boogie: yay!!!
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Kaye-ChieeL Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
NICE ~ AWESOME !! \*.*/ :iconwowplz:
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YAYProductions Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Student Writer
Interesting.
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Aquaphen Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Honestly, the wording is a little off in my opinion, as is the structure, but the idea is all that matters.

I see a vague implication in my own thoughts that says that perhaps the marionette master is God(though forgive me I don't personally believe in him). We are all his pawns, in a chess sense, his puppets in a show sense, and he controls us, taking us when he sees fit and using us wisely until then, almost for his entertainment. For his show.
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LivingOnAir Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
deep and to the point !
relates to all lthings which is why i like your poems so much, they arent just for the people who had thier hearts broken by ex lovees but this csn also relate into friendships, family struggles and such!
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Luxazz Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I just put my hand to my heart when I was reading this. People who play with heart strings. Bleh. Your writing is so easy to relate to Esp. This one <3
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CheshireHearts Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist
big words :O
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darkcandyxx Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel as if my current situation in life is an example of this. I enjoy how I can relate to this and I think it's great~!
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